q 1. The departments will merge together next year.
ans 1. The departments will merge next year. (remove: together)
q 2. If you refer back to my report on the accident…ans 2. If you refer to my report on the accident… (remove: back)
q 3. The committee wishes to take this opportunity to congratulate ABC Corporation on their award.ans 3. The committee congratulate ABC Corporation on their award. (remove: wishes to take this opportunity to)
q 4. I am writing to tell you that your account shows a balance $1003.50.ans 4. Your account shows a balance $1003.50. (remove: I am writing to tell you that )
q 5. For your information please be advised that the Phone Payment Service (PPS) details and application form were sent to you on 8 April.ans 5. Please be advised that the Phone Payment Service (PPS) details and application form were sent to you on 8 April. (remove: For your information )
q 6. Income for the month of November set a new record.ans 6. Income for the month of November set a record. (remove: new )
q 7. The committee had a meeting Monday and made an announcement that it would recruit more people to work.ans 7. The committee had a meeting Monday and announced that it would recruit more people to work. (remove: made an announcement ;rewrite)
q 8. The new product was launched for the purpose of giving the consumers other alternatives.ans 8. The new product was launched to give the consumers other alternatives. (remove: for the purpose of giving ;rewrite)
No comments:
Post a Comment